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sometimes in June the skies will break open;
unfathomably
giving way to laughter and a shower
of moments too pristine for their owners
that like words
tumble down and bump you on the nose
and you say, "oh, excuse me"
like a half-awake,
passing
snail
and I wonder
if moments could be captured, put in coffee cups
and stored alongside
my jam jars and glass bottles
until they're needed again,
like on days when I don't have
you?
I try sometimes to call the morning sundrops
out of hiding,
brazen against a roof of rainclouds
a curtain of water
and all at once too noisy thunder
I will think,
please hurry,
we have whole lives to get to.
unfathomably
giving way to laughter and a shower
of moments too pristine for their owners
that like words
tumble down and bump you on the nose
and you say, "oh, excuse me"
like a half-awake,
passing
snail
and I wonder
if moments could be captured, put in coffee cups
and stored alongside
my jam jars and glass bottles
until they're needed again,
like on days when I don't have
you?
I try sometimes to call the morning sundrops
out of hiding,
brazen against a roof of rainclouds
a curtain of water
and all at once too noisy thunder
I will think,
please hurry,
we have whole lives to get to.
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Inspired by *GoodbyeLovely, who is amazing.
Inspired by *GoodbyeLovely, who is amazing.
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giving way to laughter and a shower
of moments too pristine for their owners
(perfect)
and I wonder
if moments could be captured, put in coffee cups
and stored alongside
my jam jars and glass bottles
until they're needed again,
like on days when I don't have
you?
(aaand perfect)
perfect, perfect, perfect.
have i mentioned that it's perfect?
of moments too pristine for their owners
(perfect)
and I wonder
if moments could be captured, put in coffee cups
and stored alongside
my jam jars and glass bottles
until they're needed again,
like on days when I don't have
you?
(aaand perfect)
perfect, perfect, perfect.
have i mentioned that it's perfect?